Cool you got some reviews and requests. Thats the hardest wall to get through in this biz. Don't assume its your writing, especially if you're pitching reality show ideas. More often than not, its the subject or format. If they like a concept, I think they'll go after it and make it happen, so long as you've delivered something unique that totally original. Not so much about hitting the note perfectly, as much as it is hitting the
right note.